Wow, this is really tense and atmospheric. It's like the end of the first act of a play. I like how you subtly filled in some background for both Moriarty and Holmes. For a villain who looms so large, there really isn't much we know about Moriarty. I love the sense you give here that for all his confidence, Holmes just might loose
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Date: 2009-01-30 08:40 pm (UTC)