Observational Analysis (The Even Bastards Have Brothers Remix)

[prof_pangaea]

Title: Observational Analysis (The Even Bastards Have Brothers Remix)
Author: Professor Pangaea
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes
Disclaimer: Mr. Holmes is in the public domain, but as always, credit for his creation belongs to Sir Arthur Conan Doyle.
Notes: This piece is a remix of the short story The Other Brother, by serenissima (also known as killalla), and written for the Remix...Redux IV, organised by the wonderfully hardworking musesfool. Thanks must be extended to them both for the inspiration and opportunity that they provided, and an extra thanks to serenissima for her excellent remix of my story, Five Things That Never Happened to Sherlock Holmes and Dr. John H. Watson. Her remix can be found here: The Player of Games Remix
Summary: "All emotions ... were abhorrent to his cold, precise but admirably balanced mind. He was, I take it, the most perfect reasoning and observing machine that the world has seen."

Observational Analysis



As always, feedback and criticism are both sought after and cherished.

Comments

[http://users.livejournal.com/__marcelo/]

Great! The choice of point of view lent the situation an emotional tone that wouldn't have had -or, rather, wouldn't have been so manifest- otherwise. It's a great remix, and, as always, your Holmes is both *more* and at the same time perfectly himself.

[prof-pangaea.livejournal.com]

Very fine praise; thank you very much.