This is fantastic. Beautiful, touching... I did think MH's telegrams were slightly easier to interpret than Caine might have wished, but their tender brotherly interactions (/snerk), Mycroft's alarmed persistence and Sherlock's brusque moodiness, were right on the mark.
The format is also extremely engaging. I love the multinational telegraphs, and you incorporated the text very nicely. The references to Watson's publication of Hound and especially the unknown Atlantis '63 are highly intriguing. And Holmes quoting Hamlet? Very sweet.
P.S. Sherlock calling himself Caine? I find myself Without A Clue as to why....
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This is fantastic. Beautiful, touching... I did think MH's telegrams were slightly easier to interpret than Caine might have wished, but their tender brotherly interactions (/snerk), Mycroft's alarmed persistence and Sherlock's brusque moodiness, were right on the mark.
The format is also extremely engaging. I love the multinational telegraphs, and you incorporated the text very nicely. The references to Watson's publication of Hound and especially the unknown Atlantis '63 are highly intriguing. And Holmes quoting Hamlet? Very sweet.
P.S. Sherlock calling himself Caine? I find myself Without A Clue as to why....